Oh my gosh! Winston is a prisoner!
The conditions of the prison where Winston is being kept are ungodly and not fit for human life. Many telescreens monitor Winston's every single move. There are many other prisoners kept in jail. There is a fat old lady who thinks she is Winston's mother, and someone that used to work with him,whose name is Ampleforth. They talk about why they are being kept in prison until the guards take Ampleforth away.
Tom Parsons, Winston's neighbor, is stuck into Winston's cell. Parsons had been put there because his daughter turned him in to the thought police. The guards take Parsons away.
Winston thinks O'Brien will save him but realizes he is not going to be saved. O'Brien is not a member of the Brotherhood, just a fake one. He orders the guards to beat Winston.
3 comments:
- plot not content
- poor attention getter and struture
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Your writing is too informal for the criteria. You have no real format to the blog, and your post is a summary of events not a reflection with connecting ideas.
Include your thoughts instead of just summarizing what you read. You should also consider revising your structure.
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